Teen Poetry #5 |
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Not For the Faint of Heart (that's the title..not a warning) |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Shadows are painted across my walls, I’m saddened by the lack of light inside my mind, I’m pessimistic, idealistic, surrealistic, Happily unsatisfied with being unrefined. Fear is clouding my every single thought, I’m saddened by the lack of light in my life, I’m erratic, happily monochromatic, idiomatic, Dancing with sorrowed glee inside my strife. It’s my choice to follow the darker road, I’m saddened by the lack of light inside my soul, I’m denied, cast aside, delightfully horrified By all the righteous evils of this hellhole. Leave me in my sorrow, leave me in my pain, I’m delighted by this life so bitter tart, You want to better understand my mind? Be warned, it’s not for the faint of heart. |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Adam....you rock man. I totally hate you Babe, you write so well! Lol. I'll give you a dollar for your talent! Woo! Anyways, this one is really good (as always), you better write another soon. |
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quietlydying![]() ![]()
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
hmmmmmmm... intriguing. i liked it. there's something about it, i just don't know what. i must say i do like the first stanza best. - jen so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 [This message has been edited by quietlydying (edited 10-16-2001).] |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
I have to say the format rocks. You did good on this one and I mean that. Dark and moody, it put me in the attitude for a while. "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
Glad it had that effect on you Fozzyozzy. That's what I was trying for. -Adam "Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice Doggy' while you search for a rock." - Will Rogers |
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