Teen Poetry #5 |
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Poem about a love I never had |
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yankey102002 New Member
since 2001-10-13
Posts 4Alabama |
Can somebody tell me, What I’m doing wrong. I can’t seem to get you outta my head Can’t seem to move on People may think I’m crazy For having feelings for someone like you They don’t see the kind of person you really are And all the amazing things that you do. Chorus: If only these feelings would pass by Or maybe you could give “us” a try There’s something about you That just drives me crazy What can I do to make you see That I’m in love with you baby? I keep having the same dream Of you and me together I just want to be with you Now and forever If only this dream would come true We would passionately kiss all through the night We would look deep into each other’s eyes Speak soft words and hold each other tight. Chorus: If only these feelings would pass by Or maybe you could give “us” a try There’s something about you That just drives me crazy What can I do to make you see That I’m in love with you baby? I wish I could tell you how much I love you Instead of having to keep it all inside Someday I know I’ll eventually give in And express to you what I have been having to hide Chorus: If only these feelings would pass by Or maybe you could give “us” a try There’s something about you That just drives me crazy What can I do to make you see That I’m in love with you baby? |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome!!! ![]() ![]() |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Wow! A really excellent write! This one went to the library... interesting how a lot of peoples first posts are really good... shows a good trend ![]() Can't wait to see other writes by you! -Dreys |
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Honey Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 92Hot girl From Canada |
I loved this, I actually have a "tune," for it in my head. I was partically singing it and it was beautiful. I would love to sing this song to someone. Great write and welkum to pip, You'll love it here ![]() It Feels As If I've Always Been Someone On The Outside Looking In. |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
wow...great job with this one! have faith, if it's meant to happen it will, and if it's not maybe one day you'll look back and "thank god for unanswered prayers" me |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Welcome!!!!!!!!!! This was a great first post, very romantic and heart felt ![]() ![]() |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I really enjoyed this and welcome you to passions. |
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~gretchenp34~ Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 46Ohio, USA |
ahhhh thats so sweet!!!!!! i loved it!!! beautiful! beautiful! absolutely beautiful!!! ![]() Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart. |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
Great Poem to introduce yourself with! Excellent write, I look forward to reading more in the future. Welcome to our family at Passions, Hope you enjoy it here! Keep writing! |
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