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Cant wait.... |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Cant wait Cant wait to love you more, To hold you in my arms, feel your lips upon mine. Cant wait to love you more, to look into your eyes, feel your breath against my neck. Cant wait To hold , to look, Feel your lips, your breath. Cant wait to love you more to cherish all words spoken feel all the small touches cant wait to love you more to stare at you all night feel your eyes on me Cant wait to cherish, to stare, feel your touches, your eyes on me cant wait, till that night... "If I made you mad today, would you still love me tomorrow?"-Incubus |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
 Sweet, but sad for me to read. Nice job, tho. "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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~gretchenp34~ Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 46Ohio, USA |
aawwwwwwww i really liked that!!!!! makes me miss my guy right now at this moment... Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
aawww! That is so sweet! If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
heythanks guys. tonight is THE night! in 2 hours! omigod im so happy! "If I made you mad today, would you still love me tomorrow?"-Incubus |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ALyssa --- this maybe your most emotional poem yet. I see more feelings ecpressed on this piece than your other poems that I've read. You did really good. Thanks for the beautiful read. *applauds* hi Sweets  , Lizzy  , Jesa  , Ina  , Allysa  , Marie  , Cherish  , Jenn  , Chelsea  , Leah  , Kimmie  , Ashley  , Smurfy  , Alexia  , Kamie  , Kari  , Nan  , Sea  , Zu  , Lml  , Albertia  , Linc  , Jesse  , |
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luckyducky_505 Member
since 2001-04-29
Posts 53Kentucky, USA |
This was really awesome and may I say congragulations! Wish I could write this good!!  Can you please tell me how to make the smileys? Just email me to let me know if you don't [email protected]Smile -- because you never know who's falling in love with it. |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
This was really good Amee. WOW, I thought you told me you havn't wrote anything good lately. Well if all of your's are this good I'm hoping you post them all. Great Write. Later ex animo, Aaron I give up trying to fit anything into the space given here because everything I ever try to say here always just seems to end up being a bit too long |
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Knight of Secrecy Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 113San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice nice poem, well done, liked it especially this line "to cherish all words spoken" |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
thanks guys... just so you know, i had a great time... Im so so so in love..... "If I made you mad today, would you still love me tomorrow?"-Incubus |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
OOOOOOOooooo *Sniffs* AWwww...So sweet... Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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