Teen Poetry #5 |
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ramblings of desperation... |
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quietlydying![]() ![]()
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz ![]() |
maybe i should start giving titles to my poetry. just a thought. [untitled] So night may come to all those who rest in peaceful dreams, and where am I left, to walk the line, take the charge. Night shift's mine, need you need you. Vivacious fully conscious nightmares, living my own personal hell. Swallowed me whole, cold to the touch, this wasn’t s'pose to happen, help me help me. - jen so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 |
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rolly_polly Junior Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 41puerto rico |
Hey this is a really kickass poem, very honest....i hope all is fine. ![]() |
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xShUgArHiGhx![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was an awesome poem! nice job ![]() |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Great poem, great poem!!! If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Wonderful poem I love it!!! Lauren |
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