Teen Poetry #5 |
a minute |
knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
a minute, split second in time with nothing more but the gliding flow of this sea never ending time warped unsung harmounic blessings whispered by the stars in reverence unadorned by anything but this aura of pale light shining against an epiphany of sooner or later cast by the heavens in speehclessness survey of all things in this uncertainty “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Suga_Baby Member
since 2000-08-06
Posts 380Maine, USA |
Hey! Yook took my title! HOWEVER, even though you took my title, I was pleased to find that your poem was nothing like mine at all! Good job, but get your own title!!!! *hehe* , Suga "A dream is a wish your heart makes while you are fast asleep." |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
oooh this is purdy! nice imagery! great work! *Pixie* |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Wonderful job, Tiff. The words you chose were absolutely beautiful. Great imagery here. I enjoyed this. Keep 'em coming. |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
I think it is interesting to have 2 totally different poems by the same title. It just goes to show how many different poem can be made off of one idea. Great job on your poem. *Amanda* |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
wonder piece of verse! |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I think you did rather well on this one. I liked it tiff. Keep it coming. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
beautiful verses here...i liked it TiFF...hope to see more. im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Beautiful words here, Tiff. I'm really enjoyed the new style of writing you've picked up. Nicely done here. I hope to see more soon. --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'd love to get a little explanation on this poem Tiff I'm a little lost Must be me *waiting for the explanation* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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