Teen Poetry #5 |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Well, i think i post here entirely to much. I felt like writing and i came up with this- i think it could work as a song.. then again mebbe not. Doesn;t matter, was just writing and thought i'd share. You say i can sing but my voice is rough You tell me i can dance but i trip and scuff You tell me i know but i never show it You tell me i can win but i always blow it You tell me i can love but i don't seem to, the only thing i want, is to be with you. -Nathan |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Everybody say awwww.... lol this was really good, I really liked what I read, It flowed well and it wanted find out where it was going. You get extra points for cuteness ![]() Zu "Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT" |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
and I tell you that I like what you wrote here!! Charisma |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Aaawww... What?!? I was told to say "aawww!" I would have said it even if I wasn't told to! Awesome! Into my library! Woohoo! That is so sweet! If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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