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Set Me Free |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
I just sorta closed my eyes today and wrote and this is what came out, nothing in the way of a problem in my life or any of that. Fire floods the mind A deluge of rage that cried For the torments to cease Before my heart does freeze For what you do to me Please just set me free... "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh I like very much! Mr T trusts me with coaching the Jr. Girls rugby team. What was he THINKING?!?!?! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
not bad at all for such a short poem thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I definitely enjoyed readin this, Dragon Fang. It had so much in it despite the length. The ending is great. Those pauses really bring out what this piece is all about. Thanks for sharing this. I look forward to more.  ~AF~ I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today? |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, this was colorful despite it's length, i liked it alot...thanks 4 the read..  Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....~me |
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