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Teen Poetry #5

Just Don't Do That

CowgirlFreedom17
Member

since 2002-05-20

Posts 82
Mississippi

0 posted 2002-05-21 01:32 AM

Don't look into my eyes and tell me you love me when you don't know.
Just don't do that.
Don't kiss me so passionatly if you have any intention of taking it back.
Just don't do that.
Don't walk my way and look, only to not say anything at all.
Just don't do that.
Don't get my hopes up, only to tear them down again.
Just don't do that.
Don't turn your back on me after promising to stay forever.
Just don't do that.
Don't give up on me.
Don't do that.
It hurts.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

1 posted 2002-05-21 04:15 PM

That reminds me, rhythm-wise, of Meatloaf/Jim Steinman's "I Would Do Anything For Love (But I Won't Do That)" And I don't mean that as an offense.

Enjoyed this.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

2 posted 2002-05-22 11:16 PM

I really liked this one, it was written very honestly...I've felt like saying this to people a few times in my life, and it's comforting somehow to hear that someone else can relate to it.

Thanx for the good read
Kay

The day you were born, you were born free
That is your privilege.

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

3 posted 2002-05-23 09:39 AM

Brutal Honesty.
While it might feel good at the time, it hurts eventually.

Don't let your mind wander, it's much to small to be out by itself.

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