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The Last Good-Bye
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The Last Good-Bye |
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AllThatGlitters4321 Junior Member
since 2001-10-03
Posts 45 |
I was such a fool to keep taking you back. Knowing that it wasn't over You played games with me had me thinking there was no one else until i found the letter from her on your shelf You told me she was just a friend, and it's not worth are relationship coming to an end. Well baby i heard that to many times. I should of listened to my girls when they said i should call it quits, but see i was blind, and i always put up with your crap. Don't ask me why i did all that i did for you completely clueless never saying we were through. You told me you loved me, and i was your world you promised me that there was never another girl, and like a fool i believed you. I don't know how i could be so blind all those nights you were "just out with your boys," and i would wait for you to call like you told me you would but i knew that you weren't thinking about me at all.... Well i'm through this time with all your lies, and now this is it... this is my Last Good-Bye. [This message has been edited by AllThatGlitters4321 (edited 10-05-2001).] |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Very emotional post.. you expressed yourself well. It sounds like you've done what's best for yourself, that's good. I really enjoyed this, keep posting! *hugs* Sarah *the chains which once held us are only the chains which we've made* |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
Very strong. Finally saying Good bye can be very fulfilling. Great Write. Ex Animo, Aaron |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
Very good write, definately emotional. It is good that you are moving on, because not all guys are like that. I really enjoyed this poem  -Nathan |
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