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maybe we'll wake up
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maybe we'll wake up |
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layla Member
since 2000-11-19
Posts 74 |
God created oceans connecting us We've created lines on paper separating us, catagorizing us, distancing us, ruining us God created human beings We've created Whites, Asians, Hispanics, Indians, Italians, Arabs, Swedes, Germans and so on God Gave us minds We've used our minds to grow, prosper, become civilized, become greedy, to hate, to judge, to be immoral. God Gave us our bodies Our temples, they dont even belong to us, yet we abuse it, we hurt it, we cheat it, we hate it God gave us a conscience, a heart but we step all over eachother we bruise eachother's hearts, and our conscience just disapates, and becomes nothing God made good we've turned it evil GOd made nite and we've just been sleeping our eyez closed half blind, half choosing not to see God made the sun so there could be morning God made morning So maybe one day We will wake up |
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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Good poem, I really like how you ended it. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Wow, i really love this Layla! You have a unique style here Keep posting!  *the chains which have held us are only the chains which we've made* |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
oh I like this one! theres some really great poems on here lately and I'm glad this is one you shared! Thanks! |
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