Quickly wiping off the tears

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Teen Poetry #5

Quickly wiping off the tears

lilibeelee
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since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

0 posted 2001-10-01 09:48 PM

Pain is all I know
Pain I can not show

A continual reminder of all my mistakes
A continual reminder of all my heart breaks

Eyes that glare
Eyes that stare

Words are spoken,Rummors fly
Words are spoken,I can't help but cry

Hallways empty,empty like everyone
Hallways empty,when is this hallway done?

Reminders of so many things
Reminders and the pain it brings

My face doesn't crack it remains to be still
My face doesn't ever show how I feel

Snickers Snares remarks are made
Snikers and comments it becomes a blurry fade

Seeing the heart breakers
Seeing the heart takers

I look at my reflection as tears show
I look at my reflection and see the tears flow

I quickly rub my tears off and turn the other cheek
I quickly rub my tears off with my arms so weak

I throw on a smile and show no fear
I throw on a smile, but yet another tear

No one knows these emotions no one but me
No one knows these emotions, nore can they see

Ignored and unseen I shall remain
Ignored as the tears of my pain

Jenn Cirrincione

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since 2000-07-02

Posts 2107
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1 posted 2001-10-02 08:17 AM

Awww, I know this feeling. Sometimes you just feel so unimportant. But, I heard this quote once that makes sense... "To the world you may be one person; but to one person you may be the world". Think about it. Nice work!

Jenn

"You've got to get yourself together, you got stuck in a moment, and you can't get out of it."

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 10-02-2001).]

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
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2 posted 2001-10-02 02:08 PM

I liked the format you used..it was a nice change...i like how you expressed your feelings in this poem..full of emotion and very clear..i enjoyed it...keep up the awesome work

AngelPoet87
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since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
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3 posted 2001-10-03 08:05 PM

This is honestly one of the most emotionally filled pieces I have ever read. I think this is completely wonderful, truly. Absolutly awesome job on this, its going in my Library. Keep writing, and stay strong.
~Ali

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