Teen Poetry #5 |
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To be or not to be... |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy ![]() |
Raging river, now placid. Friendships thriving, now starving. What once was there, now is no more. Our friendship, now ceases. I stand alone, no longer with you. Visions of past time, fade from my mind. When I wrote this I am questioning on of what I though was one of my best friendships and friends. Just wrote it wasn't going for anything just thinking. Thanks for reading. -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
*hugs* jermaine i already told u wut i thought about the poem and this situtation. just give it time and talk to this person. hollaw at me if ya need to talk. i liked this poem alot. very emotional to me, ive been there. *hugs* love you moochs. tiff ![]() “A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.” |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Linc- Don't ever give up on such a wonderful, deep friendship. You'll regret it. Trust me. You'll find very few people that you can REALLY connect with. I liked the poem. No hidden meanings...just simple and honest. Nice read, Linc. |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Guys, I don't plan to ![]() -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Spice knows what she's talking about. I enjoyed this poem and urge you to try and rekindle all that was with your friend. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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LoveBug![]()
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Friendship is a rare and precious thing. Its difficult to find, so don't give up on it, ever. You express yourself well. Best of luck! ![]() "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
ULI, sweetie. ![]() --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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angel_2401 Member
since 2001-06-12
Posts 131Cincinnati, OH |
I know from expierence not to give up on friendships. But this is really good, and I hope everything works out! ![]() I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem. |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, It did, ULI Fading Away ![]() -- Linc "Blood Moon" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Hey, we all go thru trying times and doubts in our minds. If it's really a true friendship, it'll survive these times. be strong. thanks for the read. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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