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Teen Poetry #5

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aaron woodside
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since 2001-09-26

Posts 256

0 posted 2001-10-02 09:41 PM

For a Friend,
OH!!! How I felt for the flower
that was birthed in the morning sun,
and died by the pale moon.
Always Here...

Ex Animo,
Aaron

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

1 posted 2001-10-03 08:07 AM

Whoa..short and sweet...and powerful! I really liked this..im not even shur what to say but wow!

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-10-04 01:07 PM

What a nice poem Aaron. I'm loving the imagery in this. Great descriptive piece.

Keep replying and posting.

~AF~

I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today?
Nelly Furtado - Hey Man

Angelwings
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since 1999-08-27

Posts 222
IL, USA

3 posted 2001-10-06 12:42 PM

Aaron~
And yet again I'm saying thanks. Thanks for sharing. Although this poem doesn't have much length it has a lot in message. Good poem.
Chelsea

If we're told we're bad, that's the only idea we'll ever have. Maybe if we are surrounded by beauty someday we will become what we see.

cherish
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since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-10-07 11:58 PM

very nicely done aaron. very nice indeed. short and sweet and like AF said- the image of the flower is beautiful. thanks for sharing..

wouldnt it be wonderful if children werent scared of looking up at the sky?

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