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CowgirlFreedom17
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0 posted 2002-05-21 01:13 AM



Somewhere deep down you know how much she loves you.
You know she will stand by you through thick and thin.
You know she'll give anything for one chance.
You know she'll never give up on you.
You know she'll hold you while your in tears.
You know she'll find everyway to sweep your breath away.
You know it hurts her to look in your eyes.
You know she wont stop loving you, ever.
You know somewhere you want to give her the chance.
And somewhere you know that that girl who needs you, is me.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

© Copyright 2002 Melissa Calvert - All Rights Reserved
bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-05-21 04:16 PM


Ooo ... enjoyed where that went.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

AliveAgain
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2 posted 2002-05-21 04:39 PM


awww, he better know all that or he's not worth your time and he better make a move fast lol. thats a sweet write. in fact, i know of someone in my life i can apply that to. great write and i hope to see many more!

~R*

If you would not be forgotten as soon as you are dead and rotten, write something worth reading or do something worth writing.
-Ben Franklin

Cinderelly
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3 posted 2002-05-22 01:00 AM


I really like your poetry and can really relate to this poem . . .

Life is a moderately good play w/ a badly written thrid act. - Unknown

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4 posted 2002-05-23 10:10 AM


Really sweet poem. I liked it a lot!! Thanks for sharing

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