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That left Unspoken
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That left Unspoken |
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lil_pwheeler Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 39here |
Nothing is worse than That left Unspoken You lose a love Or a friendship is broken The simplest things Are worth the most No one could care How big your muscles are Or just how much you boast Its the hugs The thank yous The kisses And I love yous Its the step with another Two by twos I've always noticed Thats its other guy Who gets the girl Thats only cuz' He leaves nothing unspoken He dosent hide under the world Leave nothing unspoken And nothing unsaid Because you never know When it all might go end But there is nothing worse Than that left unsaid No one dies a virgin, life screws us all |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
ohhhh how sweet! i like this piece alot library....!! "I swear officer! It was PINK." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
"The simplest things Are worth the most" You hit that right in the bullseye I felt you are a little antagonized in this poem Hopefully, it's just me misreading it Hope things are ok thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
A most excelent piece  Diffenety adding this to my library... quite well done. I agree with this- but then the next issue is if you say it all- then there is a probability with scaring the other away. Thats an issue i suffer with... But most awesome poem *grinz* -Nathan |
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