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the_rescue
Member

since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

0 posted 2001-09-27 10:39 AM

Death, arms wrapped around hope
life, nothing there to help me cope
it's time, maybe time to give up
I'm walking around holding an empty cup
definition of a failure at times that's me
bound to helplessness but no one can see
resurected pain it's found it's place
seeking for something not finding grace

Bound captivated by my own desire
the evil within consumes me like fire
melted down the wind blows my body's chaff
while the people around me just sit and laugh
restoration of my previous state
now I'm bound by what seems to be self hate
so does it matter if I inflict my own pain
maybe the pains the reason I'm going insane

It's all good though I'll press on
hopefully forgetting about past things gone
but in my hallucination can I see
the chains and the locks that control me
will my thoughts motivate my actions
and will those actions cause negative contractions
I struggle while the buildings of life tumble
do I pick up the piece that cause me to stumble?

to be continued.....there is more but I don't have time to write it now...

we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

1 posted 2001-09-27 11:30 AM

Oh wow!!

This is outstanding. I could feel every single line in this and my head was nodding all the time. It is a great write on how you're feeling. I do have to say that if you need to talk, you can always email me. Things don't stay down forever. They go up a little for a short period of time THEN sink again.

Take care and thanks for the fab read.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

2 posted 2001-10-01 07:54 PM

You seem to be in a lot of pain
It's pretty obvious in you poem
I just hope things do get better for you
Thanks for sharing and keep you head up

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

3 posted 2001-10-01 09:13 PM

jimmy hun i know it's gets rough! but here look theese verses up and i hope they will help you.psalms 94:18 and phil. 4:13
with love,
robin

no officer i wasn't the one that ran up to acire and javi and kissed them than ran away it was that girl *points at lizzy*

lilibeelee
Member

since 2001-07-12

Posts 143

4 posted 2001-10-01 10:30 PM

Great great job...

!! keep up the great work hehe

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