Teen Poetry #5 |
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if you don't play, you get played |
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crazymary Junior Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 14nebraska |
I can't believe I read my poems And how quickly I let you in If I'd known it was only a game I would have played to win Why was I not listening when You warned me about your ways When did I get so caught up It's only been eight days I wonder now what I did wrong Was it something that I said Should I have responded differently From the feelings in my head Or was my head not in the game You were really playing my heart I never should have got involved I knew that from the start I feel too much, I fell too fast I will say I'm the one to blame Don't feel bad or sad for me Take no credit, have no shame I really don't expect you to A natural born playa, am I right You most likely forget a girl As soon as she's outta sight I can't say you didn't hurt me You did, I can feel the pain But don't worry, I will recover What's your loss is my gain |
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Jenn Cirrincione![]() ![]()
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
I liked this... I can feel what happened as you write it. Stupid men, think they're hot stuff... Players my butt...grrr... anyway.. nice work, I liked it much! Jenn "In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Everyone recovers in their own good time. Just take your time. Don't let anyone rush you. I like your piece. Well written. ![]() Take care and i hope everything goes alright for you. ~AF~ "Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination" |
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Skyfire![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh wow, that really sums it up. That is such a good piece. Definately the truth, sadly, that what you described happens. You'll eventually wake up one day and say, "I don't need him" and feel no pain. When that happens, you'll be a new person. Kudos to you. Rhonda Mr T trusts me with coaching the Jr. Girls rugby team. What was he THINKING?!?!?! |
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Alyssa![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
i really liked this it was a very good poem.! "I swear officer! It was PINK." |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
Hello, Well, thank you for the share I liked this a lot.. And I know how you feel with this one my frist love was a lil player and i knew it.. And He would try me to do things wit him when he knew that i knew he had a g/f.. but I feel for it anways!! It's tuff they always play hard to get and it's soo cute!!! Ya know.. haha well thanks for sharing!!! Always, Amanda ![]() If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You last line says it all Excellent piece of writing Keep it up hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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