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Skyfire 
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding 
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~Yeah, I know I've been gone, my monitor died on me... anyway, I haven't written much lately and this one is kind of on the fly.~ No Comment. That's what I say. So I don't get in trouble With my smart {edit} ways. No Comment. That's what you hear. For some reason or other You think that HE'S near. No Comment. It's just a phrase. Nothing to do with him, But I'm still amazed. No Comment. It never works. I get in trouble anyway Whenever he lurks. ~~Told you it was on the fly. Good to be back though.~~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 09-26-2001).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Hey, good to see you back, on the fly is awesome, it's always good to just throw it out there every once in a while  you can't use stars instead of a curse word, so I edited that part for you Other than that, I really like this ~SEA |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Cool piece. I enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing and don't stop writing. Oh and keep posting.  ~AF~ "Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination" |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Not bad for an on the fly poem I envy people who can do that it usually takes me at least a week to write mine I enjoyed it and thanks for sharing keep em coming hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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