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Teen Poetry #5

Coming Rain ( Acrostic)

Jezziekaka
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since 2001-08-21

Posts 58
where the trees touch the sky

0 posted 2001-09-25 08:33 PM

Coming rain
Outside I feel it even a
Modicum would make me happy, the
Incredible feeling of the rain
Notice the clouds forming
Gathering together

Rain!
Almost a drizzle
I run outside to feel it
Now I am realy happy

~Jezzika~

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

1 posted 2001-09-26 12:53 PM

Once in a while I do love being under the rain too

This is a really good acrostic
Hope to see more from you in the future
Thanks for sharing

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-09-27 05:01 AM

The rain is so tranquil. I can't think of anything else that makes me more at ease. You've written a very nice acrostic. I hope to see more like this from you soon.

Thanks for sharing.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

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