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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723
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Well it's been a while. I won't be suprised if this poem gets misinterpreted, but let me know what you think... In the wake of a realization My world spins and suddenly I'm scared Comfort slips from my finger tips As I look down on my life Seeing my life through new eyes Through the eyes of a freer man A man I admire and have strove to be These are my eyes this is my vision my life As I remove the glasses prescribed by society I realize two things, nearly simultaneously I see life much clearer without it's prescription But it's scary feeling this alone... 'Every body has their destiny... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
hey, this is really good! I like this very much  good job  |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
WOW!! i loved this one and your right it has been a while all tho i have only read one other poem of yours !~Andrea~! |
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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
this is awesome. keep it up if the rest of them are this good |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This is a very good piece, Jason. It sounds as if you've had some awakening inside of yourself. I wouldn't dare try to interpret anymore of it...I'm sure I'd get it wrong. Nice to see you posting. Jenn "In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart." [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 09-23-2001).] |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
So you're not dead. Damnit, I just lost a bet.  lolLike Jenn said, it is good to see you posting again. An interpretation of mine for this piece is going in a direction I don't think I'll voice here so I'll just say well done on the piece. Hope to see more soon. ~AF~ Kookaburra sits in the old gum tree, merry, merry king of the bush is he. Laugh! kookaburra LAGUH! Kookaburra how gay your life must be. |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
No not dead. Just busy. Thank you every one for your comments they are very appreciated. 'Every body has their destiny... |
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IsGona Senior Member
since 2000-07-14
Posts 723 |
No not dead. Just busy. Thank you every one for your comments they are very appreciated. 'Every body has their destiny... |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
good to see you posting again and a most astounding poem at that I'm very impressed keep it up hi Sweets  , Lizzy  , Jesa  , Ina  , Allysa  , Marie  , Cherish  , Jenn  , Chelsea  , Leah  , Kimmie  [This message has been edited by acire (edited 10-11-2001).] |
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quietlydying
since 2001-06-10
Posts 935the wonderful land of oz |
intriguing, very enjoyable. maybe you could use a little punctuation? - jen so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3 [This message has been edited by quietlydying (edited 10-12-2001).] |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Im so glad to see you posting again...boy where have u been?? N e wayz i can relate a lot to this poem, this is how i felt when i started getting out of my heavy depression, i was seeing things clearly yet i felt very alone...keep postin hun! |
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