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i'm sick of people
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i'm sick of people |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i'm sick of people especially the fake, i'm sick of people who's dignity they take. by talking and spreading info not true, and making that persons life hell in everything they do. i'm sick of people who think they're in love, they keep one long relationship then it's marriage their thinking of. i'm sick of people who date those kind, i'm sick of those people who can't make up their mind! i'm sick of people including myself, i'm sick of people who sit up high on a shelf. i'm sick of people who are judgemental i'm sick of people who try to act parental. i'm sick of people i think you get the point, i'm sick of people who always disappoint. i'm sick of people who tend to lie i'm sick of people that don't even try i'm sick of people i guess now i'll quit i'm sick of people who just don't get it. Come on come on and tell me why you're staring come on come on it must be what I'm wearing…tell me why's it takin so long for u to recognize and stop |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Some strong words in here, Val. People can be sucky at times but you have to go through all the bad ones to appreciate the really great ones. Try to keep your head up, alright?  ~AF~ Never speak disrespectfully of Society. Only people who can't get into it do that. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Hi Valerie. You told it like it is. No holding back at all. You expressed yourself very well. I liked it. Keep posting! |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Whatever popped into my head? Okay  I was thinking how true this is. I walk around sometimes over-analyzing everyone, and wishing they would just fall over. It's a fact of life that we're not going to get along with everyone we meet, but honestly... if everyone was just the way you wanted them to be, life would be boring. No controversy.. no interesting debates.. and no petty arguments with fake people in which to learn from. Things would be 100% not interesting. Keep that in mind... and keep smiling This is a well written poem... simple, yet powerful. Good job --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
I"m hurt lol jk I think the poem itself was good and I often get sick of people.so good stuff I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
well... this is what popped into my head when i read this, it isn't your best work but i suppose i might have liked it better if you hadn't intentionally threw in something pertaining to me, and insulting me. -Justine [This message has been edited by Pixie-Babe03 (edited 07-02-2001).] |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
If anyone can get sick of people I can. I have a short fuse for most things in life. But the way you wrote this, it sounds like you are sick of everyone. It's a good poem, but I think you are lashing out a little too much. I hope my opinion doesn't make you sick of me, or are you already?Just kidding. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
OOOOH.... burn. I understand this anger all too well. This was very to the point. Great write. Jenn "Woah my love, my darling, I've hungered for your touch a long, lonely time"- Unchained Melody |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
maybe for those of you who didn't like it, you didn't like it because i wrote the truth and u just didn't wanna hear it. val Come on come on and tell me why you're staring come on come on it must be what I'm wearing…tell me why's it takin so long for u to recognize and stop |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
strongly pointed out...i feel what you are saying... im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow I feel it. What you're trying to say, that is. Um, I'm glad that someone could finally put it into words. People suck, and there's nothing we can do about it. Meanwhile we all go around being sick of each other (oh the irony). But, nevertheless, excellent poem. I think it'll go into my library. Rhonda  "Amy, can you PLEASE come to Spain with us so that we have someone to keep Rhonda calm?" - Mr. Ardiel *insert hysterical laughter from me here* |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
hey hey i really god this poem. yeah people DO suck...but some are kooly. it's weird because we think all animals are stupid, and we hunt them..yet we're the most annoying creatures on earth. thanks for the read btw...i'll shut up before i get all pissy -fear- emotions are like evil serpents that coil around your mind---me "i cannot save you, i can't even save myself"--stabbing westward |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Way to be a female dog Val! lol I could do without the rivalry between you and Justine, but oh well. Not my business. The point is, it's a great poem! and I thinke veryone has times when they hate certain people, it' sjust up to people personally to either forgive or ignore. I ignore people a lot... :-) No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Keep the arguements out of here....ok? That's all I'm going to say for now. Anyhow, you vented well on this poem. Hope things turn out ok.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Just let it out Val That's the way to do it *hugs* hope things get better hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Very well written!!!!! I can totaly relate to this!!! really good job!! ~-Lili |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
Well, I was kinda wondering what kind of people you do like. Most people are like that at some point in their lives. But that aside, I did like the poem. Wouldnt it be nice if we were all perfect? Hmmmm... |
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