Teen Poetry #5 |
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The Days Gone By |
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knightlyshadows Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 791obscured vision |
It's been three years since I last saw the smile on your face the life in your eyes the days come and go with hardly a thought of you being gone buried and dead but a day comes soon the day of your birth and I stop and remember all the days before `~*~` days turned to years with hardly a thought my life proceded like I didn't even care then another day came and he left me too you're both toghether now watching out for me I know three years for you and two months for him time went so slow then moved to fast `~*~` I honour you not enough not even a thought blocking the knowledge of you to soothe away the pain yet on days like this you seep through my mind and tiny things remind me of how you made me smile but that doesn't stop the pain I hide I miss you both so much yet I don't even think of you `~*~` September 23, 1949 ~ January 4, 1998 November 2, 1944 ~ July 30, 2001 |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
Tiff yuo know i'm here for you. and i know how hard it is to loose both a mother and a father. so you need someone to talk to you know where to find me. robin bye lizzy,javi,acire,cherish,SEA,vicky,laura,andrea,jessa and anyone else i forgot i will be back to torment you soon muhahahahahahaha |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Losing parents is always a painful process although I am not speaking from a personal experience. With time brings memories and usually enough bandaging to heal. I hope you can get through this alright with the support of your friends and other family members. A very touching piece. Take care and thanks for sharing. ~AF~ "Hi there, can I relay a sonnet your way?" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow this poem was really sad. I really hope you're ok Tiff. Be well....... ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Tiff, pip is a great place to find people to talk to. I see all the offers already, and I too offer my ears for you. Loosing loved ones is never easy. Hope you stay strong always. Thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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Marshalzu![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This poem is really tragic, I hope your ok and I'm here if you want to talk... |
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Child of the Stars![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
I'll be your mommy, tiffer! ![]() **hugs** ...This was some very good writing, a type that I think is damn good for you...I know it was good for me to read... Love you always, hun. ~Carly Speak softly and carry a beagle. |
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