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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180
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she's on the floor in a room with no door her hands are so small her skin looks so pale her lips shivers her mouth is dry she's empty she seems cold And she - she is beautiful alone This is nothing This is nowhere her hair is navy blue her movements are rare her eyes is transparent she's dim she's a shadow And she - she is beautiful alone *-*-* So.. my first post in a while. well.. I don't have anything to say about this..*-*-* I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you? |
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punkrockerrobin 
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem. keep up the good work. robin Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
I absolutely loved this! I loved the way you wrote it and the poem itself was great  Def. a keeper! Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand. |
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lil_pwheeler Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 39here |
Abosoultely sweet. A lil strange but that adds depth, Cant wait for more. |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Hey this is great! I really liked it  keep up the great work! Sarah ps. I like your signature too *love is blind; friendship closes its eyes.* |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
 HURA!!!! *CHEERS*Oh how I've MISSED your writing!!! Such a wonderful post to come back with too! So filled with meaning, so deep...Oh I loved it! Beautiful alone... United we stand, Divided we fall. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Whoa!! EXCELLENT!! It says so much and I just love the line, "And she - she is beautiful alone". Fantastic work, Carina. Great to see you writing again. I'm looking forward to seeing many more.  ~AF~ "Who needs enemies, |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
aww thanks alot I'm glad you liked it..  And spice, I should really talk to you some day... I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you? |
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fearing-laughter Senior Member
since 2001-04-24
Posts 605land of cheese (Wisconsin) |
zaaarinnnnnaaa hey hey we're both back! yay! i liked this poem, it was pretty surreal, but good. it reminded me of an author i know...you ever read Francesca Lia Block?? she's a pretty good author...anywayz i liked this poem. yay for you being back. -bergundy (fear)- i'm a penguin! i'm a penguin! i'm a cute lil penguiiiin! i'm a penguin i'm a penguin! i eat FISH!--tis the pretty penguin song |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Girl this was outstanding!!!!! I really liked this a lot i dont even know what to say |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
Beautiful words, C/Zarina. ^^ You're becoming quite the poet here at pip! ++ Leah ++ Va pensiero sull' ali dorate... |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
absolutely a masterpiece I love it a lot amazing, simply amazing *applauds* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
thank you very much indeed.. And fear - do I really remind you of Francesca Lia Block? waw! that's really cool. she's incredible. I feel honoured (or whatever the word is.. heh heh) I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you? |
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