Vermilion Sands - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Kosetsu
Member

since 2001-03-10

Posts 450
Alabama, USA

0 posted 2001-09-18 08:22 PM

Vermilion sands of political strain,
Wandering hands of scarlet stain,
Marching troops of vagrant wane
Bring worthless days of crimson rain.

Contrary thoughts of carmine rage,
Pois’nous words on bloody stage,
Senseless wars the senseless wage
Bring cerise hurt to every age.

Magenta scars from battle’s dawn
The stepping forth of every pawn,
Crimson kings, though dead and gone,
Bring bloodied swords to soon be drawn.

Fugitive minds lost to rubied war,
Rubicund men of rotting core,
Bloodied fists of shattered rapport
Bring battle knocking at our door.

Vermilion sands of stone and chain,
Suppressed thoughts of the dead and slain,
Rudimentary laws broken in vain
Bring scarlet stones to crush the sane.

Carmine hearts that’ve lost control,
Stinging words that burn the soul,
Flying pieces of embered coal
Bring countless deaths to pay the toll.

Hate-filled pictures inside their heads,
Crimson stains where the innocent bled,
Feet treading where feet shouldn’t tread
Bring bright-scarlet bags to carry the dead.

Dead tears stinging like salted brine,
Unions fraying like bloody twine,
Vermilion sands of all things malign
Brought to a land soaked with crimson wine.
---------------
A project for Creative Writing...we had to write an 8 stanza poem about a color...I chose red.

-Adam

Of all the things that I confess,
Here's one that is doubtless
I will love you always Jess
Never think I could love you less

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-09-19 10:04 AM

Kosetsu~
WOW !
You did a wonderful job on this assignment !
Hope you Ace it ! !

Excellent !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

2 posted 2001-09-19 05:57 PM

I think this turned out awesome. This project will definately get an A. Great write!
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

AngelPoet87
Member

since 2001-04-21

Posts 280
Indy

3 posted 2001-09-19 08:07 PM

*parties* You really deserved the A you got on this! Really great work Adam, hope to read more soon!
~Ali

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

4 posted 2001-09-19 10:02 PM

A++ all the way. I'm sure this'll blow away the other poems in class.

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-09-20 12:02 PM

man...this was awesome...LOVED the read...very deep yet and well written.

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 09-20-2001).]

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

6 posted 2001-09-21 11:36 AM

Whoa! *puts her eyes back in* Has anyone seen my jaw? It disconnected and ran away.

Adam, once again another brilliant display of your talent. I know I wouldn't be able to get this much out of a freakin' colour. I really enjoyed this. I had images popping out of my head left, right and centre!

Well done on this one. Be proud.

~AF~

"Hi there, can I relay a sonnet your way?"
"Go away"
"Come on"
*dials the police*
"Alright!..."

[This message has been edited by anonymousfemale (edited 09-21-2001).]

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.