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TrueLUV Member
since 2000-07-19
Posts 158Connecticut, U.S.A. |
Lord I scream so you could hear me But no answer Tell me why you have disowned one of yours Give me an answer You see the struggle that I am living I know you watch me constantly Through those lonley nights you see it Through those nights you feel my soul being eaten Yet you have showed no mercy Only remorse I know you ask yourself how could I have made such a souless child But you really have no idea So Lord if one day you see it Bring to me your blessing Because of your pain I have learned a lesson Come face to face with your son And show me a bright shinning star So we could be as one |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Hey this is really good! I enjoyed reading it! "Its a great day tobe alive, I know the suns still shinin when I close my eyes!" |
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AngelPoet87 Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 280Indy |
I really like this, you did a good job. I especially like the line.. "Tell me why you have disowned one of yours" But thats just me  ~Ali Liefhe alle ten spijte van duivel. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's always good to ask Him for help. You are headed in the right direction Thanks for sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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