Teen Poetry #5 |
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I Love You |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
here's one I wrote quite a long time ago.. but I still feel the same about it, and the person it was written for ![]() --------------- I've said it before without thinking ahead of the breaths and admiration the false hopes I would embed it taught me a lesson in listening a little more to the whispers of my heart to see between love and adore I cried that night and woke again with pain also with a solid promise I would never say those words the same so friend, tonight when you confess how you feel know every word is from my heart every vow I speak is real trust in my voice that what I say now is true no matter what becomes of us I’ll never regret “I Love You” |
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HopelessRomanticGuy Member
since 2001-08-17
Posts 495LI, New York |
Aww.. that was sweet. You wrote that for someone special, I can tell! It was very good, in my oppinion anyway! Did you ever give this to the person you wrote about? Love will come and love will go, but friends are forever (usually). |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"no matter what becomes of us I’ll never regret “I Love You”" You sparked some thoughts in my head...Awesome write! United we stand, Divided we fall. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Good piece, ducky. Some heartfelt thoughts in here. Thanks for the read and keep writing. ![]() ~AF~ "Who needs enemies, |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Sometimes you act too quickly before thinking it thouroughly through...we all have been guilty of that but its good that u noticed and really took the time to sit down and decide if it was how you truely feel...Good poem hun! |
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