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Teen Poetry #5

Red White Blue

layla
Member

since 2000-11-19

Posts 74

0 posted 2001-09-16 02:32 PM

Red for the blood
thats been shed for our lives
White for the innocence
As clear as our cries
Blue for the hope
We see in our sky
Americans we are
And we'll be proud till we die

Alyssa

Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 385
IM ENGAGED!!!!!

1 posted 2001-09-16 08:40 PM

awwwwww im gonna cry!
this is so sweet and so nice!
im glad u took time to write and post it!

Do you believe in love at first sight? If not I can walk by again!
----ya...right---

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-09-16 11:15 PM

Very unique twist on this, Layla.
I really liked it! Wow!

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-09-17 03:55 AM

Nice patriorical piece. Well done.

~AF~

"Who needs enemies,
When you've got friends like these
Caught between me and myself again"
Motor Ace - Enemies

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

4 posted 2001-09-21 04:31 PM

VERY WELL DONE! I really liked the poem. What heart! Such passion.....beautiful.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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