Teen Poetry #5 |
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An american Tradgedy |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI ![]() |
An American Tradgedy Within a matter of seconds, Everything we've stood for, Everything hundreds of hard working Americans have built, All came tumbling down, Oh what a tradgedy, To see the World Trade Center collapse to the ground, Thousands of lives lost or not found, Thousands of family members crying in pain, Everything around them gone, The people that did this felt no shame, Its hard for me to say that "They will pay!", Not that war is a part of me, When they kill, Family, Friends, And thousands of innocent people, I will be the first to climb on the wagon, I will be the first to fight for my nation, I will be the first to stand on native soil and say "God Bless America" What a shame, The most powerful part we can deal with now, The rebirth of our nation, So again we can stand proud, "America under attack" is what headlines say, "Americans reuniting a lost flame" is what I say, They may have hit us hard, And killed many, In a way they made us stronger, United we stand, United we fall, United untill Justice is served, Once again let me say GOD BLESS AMERICA And I LOVE THE USA. All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare! |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
I will follow you onto the wagon my friend.. so many innocent people, killed because they went to work that day.. ![]() great poem *the chains which have held us are only the chains which we've made* |
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branden726![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-25
Posts 607Bay City, MI |
im back now for a while guys ive been away i just got back from NY my aunt was actually in the WTC but got out in time only got minor injuries All you other poets beware my true feelings and poetry are about to flare! |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Your poem is very toughing and I feel the same way you do.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It is a tragedy indeed Why others can seem to justify such an act, i just don't understand. Let's all just stay strong and pray for the victims and their families God Bless America hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
WOW...this is proof America will never fall...........I'm speechless... Ex Animo, Aaron |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Branden this was a very moving poem. I liked it and it had a lot of personal thought. I liked it. Keep up the great work. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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