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Could you make him cute?
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Could you make him cute? |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
Can't you see I don't have a guy? It's not very hard to tell, Can't you pull a few strings for me Just this once? I've never had great luck with guys i guess you'd say "it's just His plan" But you'd think after 16 years, He would find someone else to torment. All I want is to meet a guy We don't have to date, I just want someone I can chill with And do mushy stuff with (But not too mushy of course). So please God, let me meet a guy. For just one night, that's all I beg of you, And I'll make sure I get his number. That's all I'm asking. Oh and if it's not too much trouble, Could you make him cute? "i'm supergirl, and i'm here to save the world, but i wanna know, who's gonna save me" - WNBA Commercial |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
lol this was hillarious...really really cute too...*sighs*..you'll find the guy val, one day you will- and when you do you'll sumtimes wish for your bachelorette days once again..  ..cute poem i enjoyed it heaps| "Somehow I managed to single handedly betray myself" Javier Agosto |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
This was by far one the cutest poems I have ever read. I promise THE BOY WILL COME I cant tell you when...but he'll be there.... ~Nikki~ Smile!! You never know who may be falling in love with it... |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
LOL I LOVED THIS POEM!!! It was the cutest poem ever and it was so funny...lol Im sorry he's not dont tormenting you hun!!! Dont worry...everything has its time and place |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
The ending on this was very cute. Good job. But one thing, don't sit around waiting for him, do what us psycho chickys do and go out and find him. If you want him cute, go grab him youself. They'll never just appear on your doorstep one day. OK, enough ranting. Thanks for sharing and keep writing. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
haha this was funny, unusual one for me to read but it was good Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Cute ending indeed. I think the charming level couldn't have been greatly increased if this rhymed...But it's fine the way it is as well..So either way... HeHeHe, I'm just LOVING the last line.. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
hehehe this was so cute hey when you find this guy can i have his number to?lol!great poem i really liked it!! keep up the good work. robin Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
ha ha ha ha lol I love the ending of the poem Hey, beggars can't be choosers  just kiddingStop looking and you'll bump into him one day Don't be too in a hurry as you said, you're only 16 thanks for sharing again Val hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie [This message has been edited by acire (edited 09-29-2001).] |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
I like this ALOT. Lately it seems I'm in the same place as you. Looking, waiting, and wishing... Very cool write Look forward to more from ya. Ex Animo, Aaron |
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