Teen Poetry #5 |
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I love U so |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Thinkin’ ‘bout the times we used 2 go clubbin’ How we used 2 shake it on the dance floor. Thinkin’ ‘bout when U used 2 go out shopppin’ Spendin’ my money why is that no more. My phone bills gettin’ bigger but I don’t care Be leavin’ messages till U understand. I’ll never let U go That I love U so But how much U’ll never know If U don’t pick up that phone. ( 2x ) Standin’ lookin’ at the spot where we first met Keep askin’ my self where did I go wrong. So much pain inside that I’d rather be dead Got U’r pictures all over my wall. Turnin’ on the radio playin’ our song Be callin’ till U understand darlin’ I’ll never let U go That I love U so But how much U’ll never know If U don’t pick up that phone. ( 2x ) I’ll never let U go That I love U so But how much U’ll never know If U don’t pick up that phone. ( 2x ) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sounds like something Prince would do *sigh* love this........very well done. ![]() "It's true/the way I feel |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Nice piece but the chorus sounds really psychotic. Actually, it reminds me of a stalker. You're not going to let her go. Hell, if it's over, it's over. If she doesn't want to talk, you've got to move on. It sounds harsh but reality is cruel. Take care and keep writing. ![]() ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
If u don't pick up that phone lol. Maybe this person need a little time. Maybe you're asking for too much right now. I'm not sure, but as far as I know, if a person doesn't want to answer the phone, the person doesn't want to talk to you. Give some time and see what happens. Thanks for Sharing hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
great poem very well written. robin bye lizzy,javi,acire,cherish,SEA,vicky,laura,andrea,jessa and anyone else i forgot i will be back to torment you soon muhahahahahahaha |
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