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What have you done? |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
just venting, so if u dont like it, it doesnt matter really... You've taken away my best friend, will your complaining never end? I've never felt this way before, my feelings of trust are so insecure. You've angered me like I've never felt, I'm so mad, I cant find myself. You've stretched my nerves so very thin, All these emotions are making my head spin. No matter how hard I try, I can't seem to find out why. I just want to get up, and walk out the door, I feel like I don't even know you anymore. As I watch the full moon rise, I try to figure out, what it is about you I dispise. I don't know what it is about you, And I don't think I'm going to pull through. As I soon find out, I just don't care, it seems like your being so unfair. I still can't believe this is happening, that this is real, I don't know how to love, just how to feel..... And I'd... give it all away |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This was a good post. I thought the ending was especially powerful. Great job of venting I just noticed, this is post 700 for me. Woo Hoo Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine "Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur [This message has been edited by keoni (edited 09-12-2001).] |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
That is the question that we have to ask ourselves, about what happened yesterday. It's a very expressive poem. ~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~ |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
"As I soon find out, I just don't care, it seems like your being so unfair. I still can't believe this is happening, that this is real, I don't know how to love, just how to feel....." Amazing. It's so sad too but try to keep strong and you'll pull through. I liked the rhyme and it ran through pretty well. Good job.  ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was absolutely extraordinary!!! Such powerful words here...::hugs:: |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
wow, thanks 4 the replies, i'm glad u liked it...  And I'd... give it all away |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Hey chickie~! This was a really good poem...I think I like it the best outa all the ones I read before of yours. I know exactly how you feel so don't worry your #1 NBH will always be here mon! lol Keep posting and get all your emotions out. It helps so much it's not even funny. I'm going through kinda the same thing as you with my mom and ya know..the guy I like *Sam*..don't worry babes I'm here and I'm not going anywhere anytime soon. lylas ~Jess~*~Life is only worth living once if you've found someone worth dying for~*~ |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
That was a really good poem Hope you feel better Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well done on this poem. I really liked it a lot.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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