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keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

0 posted 2001-09-12 03:53 PM

It’s finally over this time
Too many reasons, too many rhymes
Sick of hearing I don’t belong in your life
So get the hell out of mine
You cause nothing but pain and stress
And I’m a painful mess
I thought that I was good
But I guess you got the best
Of me and my heart
It was over from the start
And it doesn’t hurt one bit
For me to see us part

I guess the time has come
Our roads have split and we’re not one
United by separation
Only bound by desperation
So I’m finally getting fed up by your bull {edit}
And ending our relation

I still remember the night
The first of our many fights
You got up in my face
And I got out of your sight
You said I’m not the one
You were just having fun
You said it’s not up to me
And you will choose when we are done
Months filled with desperation
I want to reach my destination
We are going nowhere
So I made this choice with no hesitation

I guess the time has come
Our roads have split and we’re not one
United by separation
Only bound by desperation
So I’m finally getting fed up by your bull {edit}
And ending our relation

Relationship was filled with pain
Relationship was all in vain
I had to get out now
Cause you were driving me insane
Couldn’t take no more abuse
Constant {edit}ing has no use
My only option was to end it
There was no chance of a truce
You knew the end was near
No one behind the wheel to steer
So now I’m starting over
I have lost all of my fear

I guess the time has come
Our roads have split and we’re not one
United by separation
No longer bound by desperation
It was the best day in my life
When I ended our relation

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 09-13-2001).]

Delirious_Smurf
Member

since 2001-08-08

Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.

1 posted 2001-09-12 04:57 PM

*Hug* Ahh I'm sorry...Very sucky situation, hope yer doing ok...but out of it came a good poem

Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-09-13 03:53 AM

*hugs*

This sounds horrible and no offence but this girl sounds like a psychotic SOB. I do like this for all the rage it has in it. very well written and full of emotion.

"You said I’m not the one
You were just having fun
You said it’s not up to me
And you will choose when we are done"

That rocked me. What a nasty thing to say. Do you want me to get her?

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-09-13 07:01 PM

that is really rotten to treat you like that.
You deserve better.

wow awesome poem/song? either way, it's fantastic....{minus the cursing in the forums}

"It's true/the way I feel
was promised by your face
the sound of your voice
painted on my memories
even if you're not with me
I'm with you"
~LP~

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

4 posted 2001-09-13 07:02 PM

I like this style of poetry because it sounds like lyrical rhyming.
Tight poem my man.

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

5 posted 2001-09-13 07:19 PM

wow, i really liked this one alot....despite the fact it was sad, but i'm best when i'm sad .....*hugs*

And I'd... give it all away
Just to have somewhere to go to...
Give it all away...
To have someone to come home to ...~Linkin Park

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-09-14 08:04 AM

This poem was so good...::hugs:: This person has no right to be doing this to you and causing you so much pain...you'd be better off w/out them hun but i know thats easier said then believed...::hugs::

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

7 posted 2001-09-15 12:04 PM

great poem i really liked it!! keep up the good work."relationships are stupod" as jimmy would say.
robin

Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in

[This message has been edited by poeticgirl01 (edited 09-15-2001).]

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

8 posted 2001-09-16 03:41 AM

"And it doesn’t hurt one bit
For me to see us part"

"United by seperation
Only bound by desperation."

Wow!!! *LOVED* this! Wow...Can I touch you? hahahaI need the "pissed off" vibez so *I* can start writing again. HeHeHe Seriously though, this was OUTSTANDING! So powerful and raw andjust, wow! In-your-face poetry...Much enjoyed!

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

9 posted 2001-09-17 09:42 AM

Thanks for all the replies.
SEA- I am so sorry I forgot to edit this myself. Total brain fart I guess. Sorry
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-09-17 11:26 AM

Jon, it's ok

I figured. You are great

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

11 posted 2001-09-17 12:29 PM

Wow, this was great! I loved it...I feel the pain...

Apachecat906
Member

since 2001-09-04

Posts 217
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2001-09-17 01:33 PM

United by separation
Only bound by desperation
=====

Great lines! So True!

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