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the_rescue Member
since 2001-05-23
Posts 316Japan |
ok this is brought on by today's events wow... Chaos it roams down the city street the people cry and run in retreat rescue workers unable to help at all as they slowly watch the city fall One nation under God... The pentagon up in flames the people screaming but beyond the distance THE FLAG IS STILL GLEAMING "and the Rockets red flare, the bombs bursting in air, GAVE through to the NIGHT that our flag is still THERE." This is for those now gone away no matter what we will not forget this day we will mourn for you in the days to come for now you help the Angel's hum to the families of those that are lost know that this action comes at a cost a nation now pulled together once again let the rebuilding of our families slowly begin draw a nation divided back together and Let America the beautiful reign forever... we fall like the stars then rise like the sun..Repentence.Forgiveness.We are blame worthy hold us to our wrongs..but don't hold our wrongs against us |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lord, hear our prayers |
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cutie2005 Member
since 2000-04-30
Posts 148Bennett, Colorado USA |
This was very good, and I really liked reading it.. Lets home today was the only and last day this is to go on!!! Luv, Amanda ![]() To anyone and everyone who had someone they loved or cared about deep down get injurd or killed I pray to you all because hatered or madness isn't the way, but all i can do is pray!!!!! If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them! |
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Shygirl82 Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 245Ilinois |
A beautiful tribute..our prayers and thoughts go out to those who lost someone today..may God hear our prayers and this horror come to an end... ~Nikki~ |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
This is for those now gone away no matter what we will not forget this day we will mourn for you in the days to come good on this one. a |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
I liked the poem on the personal level, where it described the panic and pandamonium[sp] as a result of this tragedy. However, I cannot say I agree with the rather patriotic attitude it held, raising America onto a throne, where it reigns forever. In my opinion, it was this very attitude that contributed to the individual or group's decision to commit this horrible act. I am sorry for sounding cold in light of such an awful incident, but I must simply state that all empires throughout history have only reigned for so long. No great power goes unchallenged. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
wow jimmy i really liked it! and it is sad. all we can do is pray. robin Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Good job, Jimmy. The break in the middle was a nice touch. Don't just think of the Americans that lost their lives, think of ALL that did.... ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Amen |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
"draw a nation divided back together and Let America the beautiful reign forever..." Wow Rescue...wonderful write! United we stand, Divided we fall. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Amen!!! hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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