Teen Poetry #5 |
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Girl I need answers |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
( MACHINE ) Hi, You have reached Melissa’s. I’m not in right now, so please Leave a message after the biip, And I’ll call you back, As soon as possible. BIIP. Honey I know you’re there so please pick up Cuz’ there’s so much I need to say to you Darlin’ want you to know that I never gave up No, not even when we where torn in two. Without you I feel miserable, Without you I don’t know What the hell I’m livin’ for Girl I need answers. For which reasons that I mad you cry To why that it’s all over Girl I need answers To why you left in the middle of the night Why we couldn’t work it out Girl I need answers. Honey I know that we have some problems But there’s problems in all relationships If we just stick together I know we can win But that’s somethin’ we have to work with. Without you I feel miserable, Without you I don’t know What the hell I’m livin’ for. Girl I need answers. For which reasons that I mad you cry To why that it’s all over Girl I need answers To why you left in the middle of the night Why we couldn’t work it out Girl I need answers. Afternoons, Are nothin’ Without you. ( 3x ) Without you I feel miserable, Without you I don’t know What the hell I’m living’ for Girl I need answers. For which reasons that I mad you cry To why that it’s all over Girl I need answers To why you left in the middle of the night Why we couldn’t work it out Girl I need answers. ( Spoken ) Please call me back I'll be waitin' by the phone please call me back I need you so. Click- |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I could definately hear this ![]() ![]() |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
ok how many times has that happened? to many for me. great poem/song. robin Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This reminded of an Usher song. ![]() Very cool. You certainly have a talent for writing songs. Now hurry up with those blasted MP3's! ![]() ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was such an awesome format...i loved how u had the answering machine thing in the beginning..that was a cool idea...i feel ur pain hun..believe me i do...i can just imagine how frustrating and painful this is...this was an excellent read and i hope things work out for you. |
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