Teen Poetry #5 |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
confusion IsetsN as anger tries to consume my every thought? resentment IsetsN as a tear tries to invade my spotless face? people surrMEound as fear tries to steal what's left of my life? noises surrMEound as I try to sort things out in my mind? alone |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
....wow.... im totally speechless, no ok here come the words...i loved the darkness of it all, it seem to have a sumwhat sad tone to it too. i loved the format- very cool and unique, espcially the way you inserted words into each other. a very cool write pharon. well done! ![]() ![]() ![]() - I stayed up all night playing poker with tarot cards. I got a full |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
awesome...but what is this suppose to spell out? "IsetsN".. ![]() if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry- |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
IsetsN = sets in....thanx for the reply's you guys! hopefully i'll be on more often but unfortunately i don't have much time b/c i just started college and it's starting to sink in that i should probably study sometimes. me |
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punkrockerrobin![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
good poem keep up the good work!!i really liked it. robin Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Awesome job...I too loved the strange play with words/letters...It confused me at first, but I figured it out...Much enjoyed. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
To be honest, the subject matter was great but the woven words annoyed the hell out of me. Personal opinion though. ![]() I did like the piece for that it represented. ![]() ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
Very cool poem ![]() The weird word games baffled me but then I got it. Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand. |
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lil_pwheeler Junior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 39here |
Depressing, dark, strange thats my kind of poem! No one dies a virgin, life screws us all |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Wow ![]() *the chains which have held us are only the chains which we've made* |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Wow, i love you pharon haha. Your poetry is awesome. I simply just love it. Another well written creative masterpiece. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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