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Synthetic Integrity |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733
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Age make no difference to them Shunned by society One's loss is another's gain A battle of morals and ethics While desperately wanting Yearning to please Gains little inspiration Those who call themselves artists Skinny, skimpy, oh so innocent One's trash is another's treasure Holding such morals Rare in the world today Apologizing all the while Must be her fault They don't care Not something they value Rid themselves of innocence Implications to do the same Torn inside Deer in headlights No way to go Caught up in the moment The clothes that are worn Those that aren't Leaving to imagination Not a concept anymore Dazzling waifs Hollywood pictures in their mind Look at reality Wonder why Hint, brag, lie Pout, sigh, plead Do what they do To get what they get And be rejected To be taken now Would leave me forever broken -I'm interested to hear your interpretations. Thanks Bel |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
first of all *CONFUSED* now that i got htat outta the way, lemmie take a shot (and miss) at this... artists, it is like homeless people like makin art outta trash and stuff?? or maybe something alot deeper thats jus what i got outta it *shrugs* "as below so above and beyond i imagine |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
No you're extremely off. HAHAHAH!!!! Bel |
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CLBinLOVE Member
since 2000-06-04
Posts 147Hilton Head, SC, USA |
*throws hand up again* Ohh Ohh i got it ogot it!! hehe might the topic maybe jus possibly be sex? i mean, it does fit anywa, better than my last guess did... if im right, im very impressed, well i am anyway but like...ok ill shut up now "as below so above and beyond i imagine |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
i liked this one lots especially the "deer in the headlights" part, like saying a person is dazzeled or hypnotized by the lights of life... my interpretation: you're scorning fashion, or more specifically models and what they go through or what they do "Hint, brag, lie/Pout, sigh, plead" in order to get themselves to the "top" only to be pushed back away in the end when they're "rejected" cuz they've gone out of fashion themselves. i loved these lines too: The clothes that are worn Those that aren't i thought you did an extremely good job of this one Isabel. i liked the concept behind it -different to all the love poems we have. i enjoyed the read heaps!  S |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
I'm going with models. You talk about "Dazzling waifs" and "Skinny, skimpy, oh so innocent" so that sort of gives it away. Another thing you could be hinting at is teenagers/aspiring models and what they will do to get on the catwalk for the limelight. The reason I say this is because of the lines, "Rid themselves of innocence" and "Hollywood pictures in their mind". Bel, you always write these great pieces that make you think and like Cherish said, they are different to the love ones around here. You're a nice break from all that stuff. I always enjoy reading your work. Don't you EVER stop writing. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this poem a lot. Well done on this one. Hope to see more.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I believe the poem is about girls that put out thinking they'll get what they want because of it. It's a hard lesson to learn, but that's a path they choose to take. Excellent read Isabel. Nice to see you sharing again. Hope to see more soon hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
There could be MANY interpretations on this one...But I'm going with models as well... AWESOME job her bel...LOVED it! WOW! Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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