Teen Poetry #5 |
You Make Me Want To Cry |
Allysa
since 1999-11-09
Posts 1952In an upside-down garden |
When you call me "ghetto -----", you make me want to cry. When you say you don't care, you hurt me more than you know. When you tell me it's not important, you make me feel unimportant. When you call me names, you make me want to cry. When you say you're sorry and you're not, you hurt me so much more than you can see. When you make snide comments, you make my life seem stupid. When you talk to me like that, you make me want to cry. Sugarpie313 married my poem! (that's my poem, not your poem! pooh!) |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Aww this is sad. You shouldn't let him treat you like this, Allysa! Give it back to him in the form of harsh words and a punch to the nose. Actually...don't punch him, but hurt him like he hurts you. You don't deserve to be treated like this. Nice poem by the way. Simple but it still shows how upset you are. ~AF~ "Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
Sometimes people dont know how much their words effect others. You should tell this person how you feel because they shouldnt be saying this stuff to you if its hurting you...im shur that if you told them they would stop...hope things work out...i kno how you feel ::hugs:: |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Hope they aren't doing this anymore, but don't let their words hurt you. You're a wonderful person. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Allysa, stay away from this horrid creature that treats you this way. I don't understand why you would even want to be around such a person. Hoping all is well *hugs* hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Allysa, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Ma |
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