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Teen Poetry #5

The Bliss Of Love

Zengo
Junior Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 31
Rogersville, AL

0 posted 2001-09-05 12:01 PM

Often abused,
Never ridiculed,
Sometimes maimed,
But always said in bliss,
And true to form,
With these clairvoyant words,
That seem to transcend time,
And restore wounds and abrasions,
A magical phrase,
That fuses two beings together,
Two separate entities,
Become one,
With the purpose to live,
Optimistic lives,
With the endures of bliss,
That all originated from,
Three powerful words,
I love you......

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-09-05 12:10 PM

...............awesome..................

i loved this one HEAAAAPS! the way you wrote it, the way the words flowed, the imagery in my head, the message it contained, everything was awesome nic! you havent posted in a while but htis is really really good! thanks for the great read!

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Child of the Stars

Senior Member

since 2000-09-07

Posts 1658
Ann Arbor, MI

2 posted 2001-09-05 09:57 AM

Aww....this is one of those read-in-a-soft-tone-with-candles poems. Me likes

~Carly

Speak softly and carry a beagle.

"Go outside and use your own eyes. You'll be surprised to see things you've never been taught."
~Edouard Manet

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

3 posted 2001-09-05 07:03 PM

I really liked this one too. Post more soon
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine
"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur

Zengo
Junior Member

since 2001-05-27

Posts 31
Rogersville, AL

4 posted 2001-09-07 02:22 AM

Thanks for all the comments!

Nick

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