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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Why, God, did you put me on this Earth, I have no worth, I don't deserve to be here, Would it really matter if I wasn't here, No one would notice, Or at least care, The window is two feet away, Should I or would I? |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
No, you shouldnt. I oughta pop you one for thinking you don't deserve to be on this Earth. Geesh. I know whatever you are going through is tearing you apart, but sweetie...It HAS to get better. E-mail if ya need someone to talk to. You did a really great job on expressing you feelings and thoughts. Free Verse are my favorite. Hope all gets better. Keep that chin up. You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
We all have our place, it just takes some time to find it. Be patient. Well done on the poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Angelwings Member
since 1999-08-27
Posts 222IL, USA |
Wow Peaches! It won't be bad forever. Focus on the making the future better than the stuff you are going through now. I am great at listening and I wouldn't mind hearing about it. You can e-mail at [email protected]. Sorry life isn't seeming very good but it will get better I PROMISE! Good poem. If we're told we're bad, that's the only idea we'll ever have. Maybe if we are surrounded by beauty someday we will become what we see. |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
HEY dont think like that .. but i like the peom it was said but DONT DO IT .. if you need to talk im here... just like Angelwings said im here to listen if you need me !~Andrea~! |
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~*brittt*~ Member
since 2001-05-09
Posts 76East Haddam, CT |
No no no..... you shouldn't. This poem is so sad and you expressed yourself very well, but try to see the bright side of things. It sounds like you're lonely, and you feel like no one cares and would notice if you were gone... but you're wrong. Keep your head up hun and it'll get better ~britt~ |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Ack...no you shouldn't is right! Everyone has a place (Dopey is correct this time  )I hope you get over such negative thinking, just rembember there's always another day, another chance. Nice work here. Jenn "...and this is how you remind me, of what I really am..." |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
OMG! no jess! no no no!  abosultely noT! ~death is certain, life is not~ |
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lilibeelee Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 143 |
Great job! i can relate! |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
Hey! Id miss you, cuz i havent even got to know you yet! Id miss out and that wouldnt be fair! Good poem, expresses and gets to the point quite well! Do you believe in love at first sight? If not I can walk by again! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
*sigh* *hugs* everyone has these thoughts but to do something before you find an answer that is even logical wouldn't be too good. You need to understand that life throws us many curve balls. The way to handle them is which way you hold the bat. Get me? Take care of yourself and keep writing. ~AF~ "Who needs enemies, |
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Android 17
since 2001-07-21
Posts 664Winnipeg |
It's already been said, but we all have our place in this world. It's upto you to find it...it might not seem like much, but it means alot. It's upto you to find it! Don't give up hope! "If you beleive with your whole heart, you will succeed!" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
no u definately SHOULDNT! I understand where your coming from but reguardless of how you feel you ARE needed...you may not know why you were put here but who really does ya kno?? Take it one day at a time ::hugs:: |
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Chel Senior Member
since 2000-07-01
Posts 511Baltimore, MD, USA |
Hey there, It seems as though you have friends here and no one wants to see you get hurt. I definitely wouldn't pass them up. Great piece of writing, keep your head up. Chel "True friends stab you in the front." |
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