Teen Poetry #5 |
I only wish |
SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
I only wish Tears of joy, and not of pain, tears i could enjoy. ...I only wish. Memories of glory, and not of sadness, a fairy tale story. ...I only wish. Feelings of pride, and not of hate, for him and his bride. ...I only wish. Wishes of hope, and not of dispair, hidden behind this envelope. ...I only wish... !~Andrea~! |
||
© Copyright 2001 Andrea L. Figueroa - All Rights Reserved | |||
Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
ok i just learned agood lesson, i cant just wake up and compliment on things so ugh, its a very good piece and keep writtin em Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls |
||
TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Sad poem but it's full of emotuin and I loved it.Keep up the awsome work. Lauren |
||
Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
That was a very cool poem, I liked Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand. |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |