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SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-08-30 02:01 AM

Dream Lover

My mind is void of any productive thoughts.
It is filled with visions of you,
as the night sky is filled with stars.

You enter.

You brightly fill my head with wonder and delight.

You are magic.

You touch me from afar, as if inside me.
You sedate my thoughts.
Only the spectral vision of you remains.
So fleeting, so volatile.
Yet, I can feel you.
I move with the shadow of your being.
As daylight succumbs to night,
as starlight chases the moon,
I follow the longings of my heart,
surrounding you with my passion.

Feel me.

Surrender to my desires.

Touch me.

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

1 posted 2001-08-30 02:06 AM

woohoo im baffled....i cant think of anything to say bout it, thats what baffles me

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-08-30 02:07 AM

those dream hotties can seem soooooooooo real, can't they?! very nicely done

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

3 posted 2001-08-30 02:10 AM

My dream lover became real... he is now my hubby!!!!

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-08-30 02:11 AM

......ppssst....(me too)

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

5 posted 2001-08-30 02:13 AM

Awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

6 posted 2001-09-02 01:19 AM

Aww...Loved the smilies...
And damn, I really loved the ending of this write.
Great work here!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

7 posted 2001-09-02 01:20 AM

thank you Spice i think you have read all of my work and never once tried to change it awsome.. thank you again

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*

Ina
Senior Member

since 2000-10-09

Posts 1236
Quebec, Canada

8 posted 2001-09-02 01:43 PM

This was great. I'm not sure what i can say expect that rocked! keep writing.

Regina

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

9 posted 2001-09-04 01:55 PM

I really liked the poem, but I dislike the word hubby LOL!!
There should be a better word for your husband....like....bookidy boo or something

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

10 posted 2001-09-05 12:25 PM

bookidy bo? *laughs her head off*...eye, thats so cute though!

i loved this one from you A!..wow...i love the way you write demands off your reader...all your poems seem so sensual and soft - its become a style consistant to your personality. i liked this one lots- great write here!
oh and the smilies were cute! i think its the first time ive ever read a poem with smilies in it!

..rock on A!

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