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Teen Poetry #5

Reflections of Time

Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2001-08-29 08:12 PM

Tumbling down a hill,
Trying to get the will.
Move on they said,
Visions of darkness in my head.
Glaring into your eyes,
Can't see all the lies.
Staring at your face,
Disappear without a trace.
Smelling on your flowers,
As if to be drawing powers.
Blood pours from holes,
They say that's when death tolls.
Spikes drivin through my skin,
Where could I possibly have been?
Cold nights come and go,
Only these blood filled tears I can show.
Refusing to show any scars,
Looking for answers in the stars.
The wounds cant help showing,
Doctor's supposedly all-knowing.
Driven by an unseen force,
Doing wicked things with no remorce.
Imagine the days of peace,
Enslaved wanting a release.
Inside the soul escapes,
Hurling itself upon your drapes.
Chosen for eternal suffering,
Evil ways are now buffering.

Eternal agony, invisions of carnage, needles stabbing you in the eye, this is what its like when doves cry

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

1 posted 2001-08-29 08:36 PM

WOWOWOW.........

this is awesome!..horrific yes, dark, hell yeah, but awesome nonetheless! im beggining to really enjoy your poetry kyle! i loved this piece...you did a great job of it.thanks for sharing!

Daffodils
            Daffodils
                        Daffodils
                                   Daffodils

TopGunLauren
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 718
California

2 posted 2001-09-01 04:00 AM

Awsome poem I loved it!
Lauren

Delirious_Smurf
Member

since 2001-08-08

Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.

3 posted 2001-09-01 01:15 PM

OOo yeah dark but soo good...it rocked

Who you are and who you will be is right in the palm of your hand.

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-09-02 01:41 AM

I'm with Cherish...Your style is most definetly "dark"...atleast thats what I've noticed about your posts so far...But I like "dark." Another awesome write here, Kyle.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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