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I'm a Big Girl Now
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I'm a Big Girl Now |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
I'm not your little girl anymore, I know what's good and bad, Please treat me like the young woman I am, Not the little girl you think you still see, I'm pissed and about to break, Consider how I feel too, You don't trust me or seem to care, I wanna runaway from this hell, And live in the peace everyone else seems to have, It doesn't matter anymore. |
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Love's Addiction Member
since 2001-06-21
Posts 57all around you |
EXACTLY JESS!!!!omg, we get no respect these days and its annoying..neways, nice job loved it   Life is a waste of time, time is a waste of life, so be wasted all the time and have the time of ur life!!! |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
yes, i can totally agree with this one, great job...  ~death is certain, life is not~ |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
well that bout sums it all up i guess =o) good job Eternal agony, invisions of carnage, needles stabbing you in the eye, this is what its like when doves cry |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Welcome! and let me just say, that peace you think others have, is just in your mind, the grass really isn't greener  I have been where you are, honestly, I know how you feel. It gets better, faster than you think. Please check your email for a special greeting ~SEA |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
first off:   WELCOME JESSICA!! I'm pissed and about to break, wooo!! i liked this first post!! i thought it was short but very forceful. good job on this one jessica!!im looking forward to more poems by you! i hope you enjoy posting and reading while you're here  Daffodils |
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punkrockerrobin
since 2001-05-15
Posts 1180Sparks, NV |
welcome to passions! great poem! i wish people would see me as a 19yr old and not a 12 year old. people think i'm not old enough to make my own decisions! well i am so they better listen! robin i don't give up without a fight so boys beware! |
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SunShine913
since 2001-08-19
Posts 211Italy but from NC |
 Welcome Jessica!!! we are glad to have you join the crazy world of us!! I really liked this one and i will be looking foward to seeing more of you work!! !~Andrea~! |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
I'm behind...But I thought I'd take time out of my schedule to specifically reply to your poem. WELCOME TO PIP! My, What a beautiful name you have...Jessica. It's just so, so...So perfect.  (Gee, can you guess? My name is Jessica too! hehehe)ANYWAY! I enjoyed the poem bunches. Your emotions/feelings come shining through. Sounds like your going through some rough stuff. Actually, when I saw the title...That song came in my head. You know- "I'm a big big girl in a big big world..." HaHa...I loved that song... ANYWAY. (Again.) Hope things get better for you. Parents have a hard time adjusting to the teenager/mini adult type thing I guess. I know how ya feel to an extent. Hope things get better for ya. Perhaps have a talk with them? Running away though, not a good option. Hope to see more writing from you soon! Replies too! Goota have some replies. Oh, And come join us in Teen Chat...You'll love it. Thanks for the read!  Buh bye!You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did. |
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