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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2001-05-21 12:12 PM

Angel soar now through
Blue sky shadows
Mist and spray
Your whisper over
The world is faintly heard;
For you are now free

I heard your screams
That fell like stones
Upon my heart
And my feet could not move
You flooded your veins
Until your eyes closed,
Darkness painted
My daylight with nightmares,
My tears filled the ocean

Rest in the peace that
Your world could not
Give you, that you
Could not give yourself
And know that love was on your
Side though you could not see
Only hear with deaf ears how

Angels scream

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-05-21 12:24 PM

you wrote it well, a very sad poem. Joyce

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-05-21 12:30 PM

Greeneyes,
Haunting and well written. Nicely done.

Poeminister

"At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet."
-Plato

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 05-21-2001).]

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-05-21 02:28 AM

Oh, sweetie~
This is so tenderly sad.
*Hugs* to you.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2001-05-21 02:31 AM

I really felt the anguish of this poem, but it was very well done. Lauren, went to visit your page but I got confused in my search as I entered a chat room? I will try again.

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
Homepage: http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/451673

[This message has been edited by Mysteria (edited 05-21-2001).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-05-21 02:14 PM

For you are now free

I heard your screams
That fell like stones
Upon my heart
And my feet could not move
You flooded your veins
Until your eyes closed,
Darkness painted
My daylight with nightmares,
My tears filled the ocean

Rest in the peace

And know that love was on your Side
========================

How many times now your words mirror my heart's reflections...
and my words now lack but sometimes no words are needed ...

Butterflies are meant to be free

me

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-05-21 02:30 PM

This death was not nice...

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-05-21 03:33 PM

Most don't think of angels screaming, but I wonder......

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

8 posted 2001-05-21 03:54 PM

Joyce~

Thank you...I appreciate you reading

~

Poeminister~

Thank you...it's hard to watch someone you love destroy themselves....I appreciate you stopping by...

~

Marge~

too....thank you always for your support, and kindness....

~

Mysteria~

Thanks always for your words....I see you found the link to my homepage...

~

Janet Marie~

Indeed they are meant to be free...your words, and support mean so much to me...thanks...

~

Interloper~

This death was not nice""

I agree, and sadly it happens...but I can't say that any death is ever nice....be well and hugs to ya, thanks for coming by...

~

Irish Rose~

I wonder too....thanks for reading Irish Rose...

~

Greeneyes~

~~*~~

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 05-21-2001).]

Morgoth
Junior Member

since 2001-05-21

Posts 26
Baltimore, MD

9 posted 2001-05-21 05:04 PM

...how angels scream

Great imagery, a unique perspective and introspective piece. I like it. A lot.

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

10 posted 2001-05-21 05:34 PM

Lauren,

This is very sad and haunting with a creative use of imagery. (((hugs))) my friend.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

11 posted 2002-03-23 06:50 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) This is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to her and I pray that soon her screams will be answered by the angels and she will be comforted in wings of grace! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are a true angel to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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