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Guess Inc.
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Guess Inc. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Guess Inc. I was taking it all in hanging out in the mall with my friends. They were busy trying on dresses, panties and lingerie and I was busy seeing if any girls would look my way. Noticed from the corner of my eye even though you were far away that you were busy glancing my way. I continued to sit there in that chair watching all the other girls and not paying much attention to you. I was busy taking it all in so when you jumped into my lap and started kissing me like a wild tiger I just pretended I didn't know you. And you gave me one of the best kisses I have ever received in my life. Definately just as good as the one you gave me while standing in front of Guess on that day that still lives so vividly in my stored memory of fantastic favorite kisses. Those were the days my friend when your silky hair and soft flesh and puckered lips set my heart on fire and filled and thrilled my nights with kisses full of lust and desire. Jameslee@May29,2001 |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Wow when you go window shopping you really get good deals. Enjoyed your story. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Wow, weird poem, not a bad weird though, brilliant poem, nicely penned . I remember saying to you once in a reply to my 200th post poem, 'You'll just have to make do with your 100th post but I'll see you at a thousand' (or something similar), I guess you overtook me a bit . Can you remember that ? Great poem, Thanks . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
James,this was a real joy to read  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah sweetie...you and your kisses...I envy you |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh those sweet kisses..... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Whew! What a kiss it was it really was quite a kiss. That's what you get when you give good kisses back..........well I'll talk to you later I'm going window shopping!! Thanks for the write and the idea! |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
wow a friendly mall, I going to have to go shopping there. enjoyed the read "difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words are filled with such bliss and sweet kisses of sweet memories! (big hugggssssss) I wish there was a mall like that near my house, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I thank each one of you for the lovely response... Yes these were fun filled days...James |
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