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crazymary
Junior Member

since 2001-06-02

Posts 14
nebraska

0 posted 2001-06-03 10:55 PM

i can't say i love him
or tell him how i feel
my heart has been broken
it needs some time to heal
he can't possibly know
what he does to me
his smile makes me crazy
why can't he see?
i love him with all my heart
he is the world and so much more
i love him now and will love him still
as much as i did before
tomorrow i will see him
and hide it once again
until the day finally comes
i will just have to wait until then

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2001-06-03 11:27 PM

Maybe he does see and he is just waiting for you to say so? You never know. This is a great write here. Enjoyed it.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

2 posted 2001-06-04 02:44 AM

Life is way too short. Take every opportunity afforded you tell another of your love. the only thing you have to lose is an experience of life. Rejection may occur, but let that not fault you. For those who travese their lives without truly living each moment live to regret the things left unsaid.

"I am not now that which I have been."

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-06-04 05:39 AM

I get out of this poem that you were together once and then separated and now you are wishing from the bottom of your heart for a reunion.......I really enjoyed the poem and I may be wrong!! But still liked the read!

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

4 posted 2001-06-06 07:42 AM

lovely just lovely writing,very enjoyable

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-06-06 07:57 PM

I must agree with those above. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Tovi
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 168

6 posted 2001-06-06 08:59 PM

Hard to hide, isn't it? This left me with a much needed smile. Thank you.

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