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Snow Dragons (part I) .........The Legend
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Snow Dragons (part I) .........The Legend |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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 Snow Dragons…part I The Legend 'Twas a land of fantasy, born from magic and dreams A place long ago lost in the passages of time Well after the chosen had blossomed, and withered Where the mystics counselled and spoke in rhyme Where snow crowned peaks grew through opaque mist Reflecting dreams of glory with each new morn' The wise ones proclaim there lays death's cold kiss A protected land, to venture there you'd be forlorn But the legends tell also of a different tale A sanctuary, filled with riches that would astound To be claimed by the chosen, just one brave soul High amongst the icy peaks, waiting to be found Only the bravest of the brave would venture there To seek their destiny high above, deep into the unknown Beyond the forest of souls that echoes a thousand screams High above where secrets lay encased in arctic stone "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
That was a very good read, I am looking forward to the other parts  Thank you Mr»ÄlleÿÇät |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~More please. - E,...so good to read you again, enjoyed this and the images your words produced (wow!) and looking forward to the others.?. (yay) . *Peace you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
'Twas a land of fantasy, born from magic and dreams A place long ago lost in the passages of time Well after the chosen had blossomed, and withered Where the mystics counselled and spoke in rhyme Where snow crowned peaks grew through opaque mist Reflecting dreams of glory with each new morn' The wise ones proclaim there lays death's cold kiss A protected land, to venture there you'd be forlorn ====================== HEY YOU!!!!!!  Look at this...you left for a few weeks and came back a poet extraordinarre... WOW...what a very cool start to an epic inspire... and your cadence is perfect..this danced. wonderful mystical frozen imagery here Eagle... very well done...cant wait for part 2.... I'm not right ... you're not wrong ... |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Yes oh yes!!!!!!!! Oh I'm so glad you posted this....all from a picture...you are wonderful....next now please |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät ~ Glad you enjoyed the read! SpitFire ~ More!!! Yes, there is more to come. A pleasure to have you read me, you take care!Janet ~ oh I've been around, you just haven't been looking in the right places. Part II is on the way, I just hope I can keep it going!. Thank you my friend, take care! Paula ~ I'm glad I could finally get it done! Thank you for the picture and the challenge! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh I enjoyed this so much!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderfully written introduction to the legend so I'm looking forward to the rest with the greatest of hopes that I don't miss them!! Thanks! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Eddie I thought this was beautifully written and enjoyed it very much........Sue Suetang |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful writing. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I always love my sneak peeks it only makes the final picture even more lovely dear poet, this is fantastic...You paint the words that weave the most beautiful pictures my dear friend~ Love~&~Hugs H~  |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Irish Rose ~ It brings much pleasure to know you enjoyed this take care!ethome ~ I hope the rest of the story doesn't dissapoint, thanks! Sue ~ I thank you for your kind comment, glad you enjoyed. Poeminister ~ it's a good feeling to bring the reader some enjoyment, thanks. Butterflies ~ Sneak peak # 3 on the way my friend You are far too kind with your words dear lady, though I do thank you muchly "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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forevernbluejeans Member
since 2001-04-05
Posts 76 |
This is a truly magnificent beginning...now I will look for the rest... |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now this is a legend I can not wait to hear about, and so far you hog tied me into this one, or is that kangrooed me into this one? Whichever, it was fantastic, can't wait for the next installment. ~*~ Remember to tell someone today that you love them ~*~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Eagle One, How you can write, I love the images you evoke when I read your work. This was dazzling. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Forevernbluejeans ~The rest is out there, or will be if I ever get part 3 finished Thanks!Mysteria ~ Glad you enjoy the series, I'll try to keep the instalments coming and it's nice to know I've roped you into this one, thanks! Kethry ~ Glad you could see those images, I thank you for your kind words, take care! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Eagle One, hadn't found you for awhile and then I hit the mother load!! Beautiful pictures in words. Now I am on to the next. Take care my friend, ME |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Mother_Earth ~ I'm not sure what I can say to that except thank you Always appreciate you stopping by! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ I'm on a mission to read each of these ... so far, I'm intrigued at the beauty of this one. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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