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Come sit on me when you are lonely
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Come sit on me when you are lonely |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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 Come sit on me when you are lonely just rest a bit after a tiresome day I promise you that I will listen to all the things you want to say I'm standing here just for that purpose and being used for so many years I'm the keeper of all those secrets of happy joys and shedded tears Come sit on me when you feel lonely I'll comfort you and ease your heart I know that you feel so much better when after a while our ways do part A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Sadness, as it seems a one way street, I hope I was only reading wrong and the comfort was reciprocated in turn...very nice though...gentle smile |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
Very lovely, And do I sense a crutch, we all use them in one form or another  Thank you Mr»ÄlleÿÇät ü |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Titia~ I found such a familiar comfort in your poetry. That special place where we can sit and gather memories around us. Wonderfully done and a great complement to the picture. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful, Titia. We all need a place we can call our own. Where we can seek refuge from the world when it is cruel to us. Or a place just rest when feeling weary. Thanks for sharing yours with us. All writing comes |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thank you Logan, but it wasn't meant to be sad. I've several places in my garden where I just go sit by myself when I want to think things over, happy or sad. Mr»ÄlleÿÇät thank you for reading, I think we all have our own comforting places. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
loved this one so much |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thank you Marge, compliment taken, makes me  and thank you Lone Wolf for understanding too.Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Move over, lady! On my way...enjoying your work very much! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Enjoyed muchly! Would like to read more! Sauni Sauni :) |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
You're welcome Serenety, lots of little places in my garden to enjoy some silence. Sauni, thank you for reading, want to read more...just look up my name at Smart Search. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...I have just read a wonderful story of a college Professor that has a rocking chair on his back porch next to his garden...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Lovely poem Titia! Nice invitation that should be taken seriously! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
How 1derful. A fantastic invitation. Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
come and sit with me Tell me your fanasty and stories to me Iam longing to hear everthing when you are lonely, I'll comfort you..... enjoyed it a lot |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Yes, this pleases the darker reaches of my heart.... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely write. Very comforting. PM |
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