Open Poetry #14 |
Annette |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
"Annette" Amy M. Kennedy Two souls that share a love A love that is so true Those two souls being No other than me and you Two hearts that share a secret A secret softly whispered at night When two lovers hold one another bracing Never letting go, always holding tight Two lovers that share a dream A dream to be together Gently holding onto that dream Always and forever I'll never love another Not the way I love you So completely and fully A love ever-lasting and true Yes, I've loved before But it was never like this Just sheer happiness and joy A feeling of utter bliss And even through the hard times Times even like today I'll still love you just the same Each and everyday If you ever wonder What you mean to me Look into these eyes of blue For then you shall see That this heart holds yours And you hold mine in your hand Then maybe you'll begin to realize And begin to understand That for as long as you shall have me By your side I will stay No more finding love in the arms of another I'll be with you everyday But to get to that point my darlin' You must first believe in who you are And realize that though you make mistakes To me you're a shining star I'm by no means perfect But I feel flawless when I'm with you I just want you to know Annette That I am deeply in love with you Though the miles seperate us And things are not ideal Still these are my feelings They are very real I sit here in my room As shadows play against the wall Holding my breath just waiting For the next call You say that you aren't good enough for me And that I should move on with a new start Please tell me how to do that When you have my soul and heart Two lovers in the night Who will find their way in the day Together forever I want to be with you Come whatever may I love you! "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! What a heartfelt yearning poem with such feeling. The author shows so many loyal devoted qualities.........I can only hope it works out! Good poem Amy! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A beautiful outpouring from your heart! I love it. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
marvelous, such a fine tribute of love and feelings...very very good job..gentle smile |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
You express beautifully, love and feelings Miss Amy I certainly hope you have given her this. Well Done Maree |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is just such sweet expression of love. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Darling girl, utterly wonderful, how glad I am to see your heart displayed and know that the feelings are both true and reciprocated. Fabulous writing as always darling girl you haven't lost your touch at all. Perfect dear heart, absolutely perfect. Love and warm stuff as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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Mr»ÄlleÿÇät Member
since 2001-06-02
Posts 190 |
A wonderful compelling work, it was a joy to read. Thank you Mr»ÄlleÿÇät |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
Amy this poem is outstanding an very very beautiful an true with your words shining through as bright as your poetic heart,i only hope everything will work out. if someone i cared about gave me this poem i would be smitten an in their arms forever. hope she will realize how much you do love her |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, what a wonderful display of emotion and insight. This was truly beautiful throughout each line. It is good to see you back and feeling so good about things. Great writing! Take care, my friend. LW All writing comes |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A wonderful expression of love, I hope you pass this on. You take care, wonderful to see your work again! "Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We do so love ya in love Amy-girl... so nice to see you so very inspired and to see the sunshine back in your poetry and your name back here. jm I'm not right ... you're not wrong ... |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
Keep There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
now, you know that I had to reply to this one my wonderful friend. . . it's beautiful, just like the heart that created it. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you all for your wonderful heartfelt replies. as always they mean the world to me. you make this girl smile! love you all. love amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Kendaall Junior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 15 |
Darlin, I can't find the words to express how much your love means to me. Thank you for coming into my life. To have the great fortune at my age to meet such a lovely, intelligent,strong, mature woman who desires spending time with me is beyond anything i could ever have imagined. So thank you for loving me, I have forever changed for the better. Lovingly, Annette |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Great Work, I enjoyed this very much, heartfelt emotion and great tenderness. Thanks for sharing. Regards, Olias. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
WHERE have you been? It matters not. I'm glad you're here anyway. This was a lovely outpouring of honesty and love. I enjoyed reading. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Amy, my friend, you have been away and you have been missed... but I am glad that while you were away, you came back with LOVE.... I am all for you... Take Care, Regards, Sudhir |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
WOWOW i never expected responses like this. thank you all from the bottom of my heart for all that you do. make this girl smile and realise she has a special place to always go home to. love you amy p.s. darlin, i love you so very much. so glad i could share you here with all these wonderful and amazing friends of mine! "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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