Open Poetry #14 |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA ![]() |
mind, take solace in the fact that his memory will not fade from thy canvas that the picture of his handsome face on that first day will always be etched there for eternity that even though that picture may change through and with time in life, it will never change for thee thou shalt always remember the way that his eyes seem to see into thy very being thou shalt always remember the sound of his delicate voice singing softer than even that of the angels thou shalt always know the touch of his hands of life across thy time worn face and, when life is over and he is no longer part of this plane thou wilt always remember that he did love thee and that his memory will always be -------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
this....minds me very well..... |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Ah Sven you are so smooth with your delivery............You're a poet that makes such huge mental inroads with your soft flowing poet's words....well done my friend!! |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Beautiful, as always, Sven... loved reading this... ~Tier |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
agree with all... very masterful in delivery and word choices.. |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Always... |
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Tovi Member
since 2001-06-05
Posts 168 |
Delicate and gentle beauty. I do so like this form. ![]() |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Oh, Sven, this places my heart in my throat as a tear glides down my cheek. Touching, beautiful are only words, they can not express how this makes me feel. |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
inhale your words carefully to enjoy it over and over. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
your a beautiful writer sven...i cant say more of the beauty i se in your poetry...enjoyed greatly and the last stanzas...perfect ![]() i'm addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, I'm gonna ramble slightly.. so be prepared ..lol. This poem actually reminds me of grandmother.. my grandfather passed away in 92. She has a painting of her and himself when they were younger, and I see catch her sometimes looking at it. I had this printed it out as soon as I read it and took it to my grandmother's for her to read.. and she loved it. It brought a tear to her eye and she said she was going to frame it and hang it next to the painting. With that story told.. it was simply beautiful my friend ![]() TaraB |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
And thy poem is a sweet reminder for anyone remembering a lost love... Beautiful Sven ![]() Isis *Enlightenment is within all things* |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sven, Simply heart-warmingly beautiful, I love the imagery that one can put with this piece, this one everyone can enjoy to its fullest by relating to thier own lives, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thou wilt always remember that he did love thee and that his memory will always be ...beautiful, Sven ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thank you to everyone that's replied. . . I'm really having some fun with this form. . . there's really no rhyme or reason to it, I just like the way that it looks on the page. . . LOL. . . ![]() rp25, I'm so totally touched and amazed that I could touch you and your Grandmother in this way. . . to know that I have done so truly humbles me, it's a great feeling to know that my words can speak to people in ways that I could never possibly imagine. . . it makes me glad to be a poet. . . blessings to you both. . . ![]() ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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